Re: lizarians, revisited
Chrono
You say that this imagined aliens of yours speak English, is that right? Well is it their first language English, or is it that they simply chose to make it easier for humanity on the communications affairs and learned it so that we would not have any trouble with the communication of ideas?
Do they have a language of their own or is it that Lizarans are a part of one of your sci fi stories that you wrote yourself, with ships powered by lunarium, an invention your were proud of until you were told that some one else had thought about it first, but that only after having stumbled upon this site and decided to aggregate the time traveling motive to your story and possibly get to live a part of it by introducing it to us and have us all believe that you are from the future.
My friend, if you want to hear that you were creative, and flabbergasted us with your own version of the future, well on my opinion you have just been creative. But there is still plenty of room for improvement. In order to accomplish that you must read, you must read a lot on all possible subjects. Specially natural sciences.
I already know you do not like science yourself, but you must give it a try in order to give your stories a more credible plot. For example;
....Imagine the world of R'na, where two rivaling nations had been doing battle for nearly two decades, must of the uninvolved countries had either crumbled because of the economic impasses or forced to join one of the two main nations. The few cities that are still standing had become enormous fortress-states where everyone simply strives to survive. Both nations, Danzeia and Kornicca, for more than a decade had been clashing in horrible battles were the conflict only seems to be getting worse.
Amidst all the decay and broken spirits a small flame illumines shinning a way out of this despicable and debilitating war. Her name is Taar Echtan the sole survivor of an ancient order of priests and priestesses who secretly dedicated their lives to the protection of the Temporal Reigns. She now appears, wrinkled and old, tired and desperated, striving to find an apprentice who would learn the mystical arts of the Ancient Teh of Old and would once again provide protection to the Reings of Time.
But even when things seem dark they get darker for now a sinister and misterious assasin is stalking Teh Taar Echtan and might exterminate the last hope the world of R'na ever had...
So you see, it has a simple language, a considerable plot and sub-plots where a wide variety of readers might get interested. All it took for me was a brief glance at my library for inspiration. Having seen the title of A war of two cities, The Assasin, And a Brief History of the Pytonises and obviously the motive of time travel gave me all the tools needed for the elaboration of this short story.
Hope you get inspired, but I shall see it....
....Until later becomes now.