TheCigSmokingMan
Rift Surfer
'McMonagle' is at the train PATH station.
He is waiting for the train and (probably hoping to run into Nora or Fran.)
And who appears.
Nora and Fran Fleming.
'McMonagle' is in the middle of the platform.
They stop near the stairs about 20 feet away.
'McMonagle' is a little annoyed visually that they wouldn't come over and say hello.
They move alittle closer.
FRAN says to NORA 'Go ahead. Talk to him' and gives her a nudge forward.
NORA then says 'NOooooooo." angrily and moves away.
FRAN follows they are now in front to the left of 'McMonagle' on the platform.
'McMonagle' is now embarassed. He thinks 'I have to stand somewhere else in the morning.'
And then who appears.
But Brian 'The Delitude' BRADEN
BRADEN sneers at 'McMonagle' and joins the FLEMINGS.
BRADEN says 'He won't talk to you either.'
FRAN FLEMING says to BRIAN BRADEN 'He won't even get on the train with us.'
FRAN doesn't realize that 'McMonagle' is nervous about being 'friends' with them again after the Hoppe's incident and doesn't know how they feel about him.
NORA FLEMING says looking at 'McMonagle' "He is an [censored]." angrily again.
NORA doesn't realize that 'McMonagle' really cares for her but their runs are "disaesterous" to say the least.
They continue talking but look back at 'McMonagle' on the platform.
'McMonagle' lets them get on the train.
'McMonagle' suddenly develops a PANIC. He thinks "This is not good. Nora is upset. And now she will bond with BRADEN." he thinks further "I'm going to lose her."
Weeks later.
He is driving along 1st Street Park. And see's her MAZDA sports coup and BRIAN BRADEN's jeep on a late Saturday afternoon.
He realizes "Well either the both missed the boat. Or they hooked up last night."
He drives by a couple of hours later.
Both cars are gone.
Days and weeks later.
He believes his sees her sports coup in front of BRADENS house.
'McMonagle' never got to warn Nora.
That BRIAN BRADEN was involved with a woman DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD from the boat. She lived with a 'swinging gay hair dresser' and had supposed alleged orgies in the house along DANIEL MURPHY who was 'implied' of being involved in something gay in the apartment.
DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD said about the "party" incident described at separate times to 'McMonagle' by both her and BRADEN. DEBBIE says "I always suspected DANNY MURPHY."
Isn't fun to party with "BI PEOPLE??? <No.>
'McMonagle' sees DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD, BRIAN BRADEN and "The Swinging Gay Hairdresser" at HENDRICKSON's drinking together. Just the three of them.
'McMonagle' went on a date with DEBBIE. But was turned off by her "close" association with the gays in her apartment. He thinks "she could be bi-infected with AIDS." and ditches her.
"The Swinging Gay Hair Dresser" says to 'McMonagle' at Hendrickson's Bar "When are you coming back to the apartment?" He was briefly introduced when he picked up DEBBIE and then other friends meet up with DEBBIE and 'McMonagle' at the VENICE. 'McMonagle' thinks 'This is strange. Am I being setup?' and leaves the VENICE. Ditching DEBBIE and her "gay/bi" friends. Who is in the bar? But THOMAS 'The Delitude' KANE. But not with this group. The VENICE is supposedly a straight bar known for its thin crust pizza.
'McMonagle' says 'Not soon.' as politely as possible. 'McMonagle' leaves the bar as soon as possible. In fact, he runs out to get away from them.
TheCigMan
He is waiting for the train and (probably hoping to run into Nora or Fran.)
And who appears.
Nora and Fran Fleming.
'McMonagle' is in the middle of the platform.
They stop near the stairs about 20 feet away.
'McMonagle' is a little annoyed visually that they wouldn't come over and say hello.
They move alittle closer.
FRAN says to NORA 'Go ahead. Talk to him' and gives her a nudge forward.
NORA then says 'NOooooooo." angrily and moves away.
FRAN follows they are now in front to the left of 'McMonagle' on the platform.
'McMonagle' is now embarassed. He thinks 'I have to stand somewhere else in the morning.'
And then who appears.
But Brian 'The Delitude' BRADEN
BRADEN sneers at 'McMonagle' and joins the FLEMINGS.
BRADEN says 'He won't talk to you either.'
FRAN FLEMING says to BRIAN BRADEN 'He won't even get on the train with us.'
FRAN doesn't realize that 'McMonagle' is nervous about being 'friends' with them again after the Hoppe's incident and doesn't know how they feel about him.
NORA FLEMING says looking at 'McMonagle' "He is an [censored]." angrily again.
NORA doesn't realize that 'McMonagle' really cares for her but their runs are "disaesterous" to say the least.
They continue talking but look back at 'McMonagle' on the platform.
'McMonagle' lets them get on the train.
'McMonagle' suddenly develops a PANIC. He thinks "This is not good. Nora is upset. And now she will bond with BRADEN." he thinks further "I'm going to lose her."
Weeks later.
He is driving along 1st Street Park. And see's her MAZDA sports coup and BRIAN BRADEN's jeep on a late Saturday afternoon.
He realizes "Well either the both missed the boat. Or they hooked up last night."
He drives by a couple of hours later.
Both cars are gone.
Days and weeks later.
He believes his sees her sports coup in front of BRADENS house.
'McMonagle' never got to warn Nora.
That BRIAN BRADEN was involved with a woman DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD from the boat. She lived with a 'swinging gay hair dresser' and had supposed alleged orgies in the house along DANIEL MURPHY who was 'implied' of being involved in something gay in the apartment.
DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD said about the "party" incident described at separate times to 'McMonagle' by both her and BRADEN. DEBBIE says "I always suspected DANNY MURPHY."
Isn't fun to party with "BI PEOPLE??? <No.>
'McMonagle' sees DEBBIE LASTNAME WITHHELD, BRIAN BRADEN and "The Swinging Gay Hairdresser" at HENDRICKSON's drinking together. Just the three of them.
'McMonagle' went on a date with DEBBIE. But was turned off by her "close" association with the gays in her apartment. He thinks "she could be bi-infected with AIDS." and ditches her.
"The Swinging Gay Hair Dresser" says to 'McMonagle' at Hendrickson's Bar "When are you coming back to the apartment?" He was briefly introduced when he picked up DEBBIE and then other friends meet up with DEBBIE and 'McMonagle' at the VENICE. 'McMonagle' thinks 'This is strange. Am I being setup?' and leaves the VENICE. Ditching DEBBIE and her "gay/bi" friends. Who is in the bar? But THOMAS 'The Delitude' KANE. But not with this group. The VENICE is supposedly a straight bar known for its thin crust pizza.
'McMonagle' says 'Not soon.' as politely as possible. 'McMonagle' leaves the bar as soon as possible. In fact, he runs out to get away from them.
TheCigMan