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\"BAY AREA TO BAVARIA\"....check online!

<FONT COLOR="BLUE"> I've always believed in TIME TRAVELERS FROM THE FUTURE...EXAMPLE #1:
JUST HOW DID THOSE THREE CONVICTS ESCAPED FROM ALCATRAZ,WITHOUT GETTING CAUGHT,THERE WERE NO BODIES,(OR WHAT-EVER REMAINS OF THE CONVICTS BODIES),WITHIN THE SHARK INFESTED WATERS,WHAT SO EVER,PLUSEVEN TO THIS VERY DAY...THOSE THREE ESCAPED CONVICTS ARE STILL ON "THE MOST WANTED LIST",ESPECIALLY "AMERICA'S MOST WANTED"...THE WAY I SEE IT,THIS IS STILL ONE OF THE MOST "UN-SOLVED MYSTERIES IN THE WORLD"...AND THERE'S ONLY ONE EXPLANATION:"A TIME TRAVER FROM THE FUTURE...GOT HIM-SELF IN,AND TOOK THOSE TWO OTHER GUYS WITH HIM...INTO THE FAR OFF FUTURE"! CASE CLOSED!

EXAMPLE #2:WAS "MAD KING LUDWIG II" REALLY "MAD(CRAZY)" AS THEY SAID HE WAS? PLUS,WHERE DID HE GET ALL THOSE "HIGH-TECH IDEAS"(FOR THE TIMES)OF THE 19th CENTURY? IN MY OPINION,KING LUDWIG II DID RUN INTO A TIME TRAVELER,FROM THE FUTURE...AND THIS IS WHAT I BELIEVE COULD'VE HAPPENED...

WELCOME TO ROMANCE...BAY AREA TO BAVARIA!</FONT>
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So many problems here. First of all, I have a MythBusters DVD my landlady got me for Christmas. Those two guys already solved your little Alcatraz problem. Look it up. It's not time travel, it's engineering genius.

Second of all, King Ludwig II was an architectural genius, and no more so than Trebonius, who oversaw the Caesarian siege of Massilia, or even Archimedes, who developed large land-to-sea melee weapons.

And finally, what you try to pass of as fiction on that awfully thrown together website of yours is terrible. Honest review here, that is crap. What should be the climax to the first act is given away in the first sentence! You capitalize every word like a fourth grader. And the narcissistic attitude of it all... it's a fantasy sequence, not a serious attempt at fiction! Go read some Bukowski, then you'll understand literature.
 
Re: \"BAY AREA TO BAVARIA\"....check online!

Friend Rusalka

Nevermind the idle minded block headed Jimmy, he doesn't know what he is saying.

Keep it up, I liked your story. It is true that you might need some more practice but hey, even my great friend William started kind of rusty the first time he ever tried to write something.

As for you Jimmy boy, you might want to be more compassionate, there is no reason to be so angry at people. If it were for people like you, every single aspirer in the world would simply put their things away and go try and do something else.

Be kind.
Be Compassionate
and please forgive.

Until later becomes now.
 
Re: \"BAY AREA TO BAVARIA\"....check online!

<font color="blue">(B)DEAR "GREAT ONE";MANY THANX FOR YOUR REPLY OF MY ONLINE STORY:"BAY AREA TO BAVARIA",AS WELL AS MY
"CRACK-POT THEORY ON 'KING LUDWIG II'"...IT IS ONLY A STORY....AND YES,I WAS SO UPSET UPON THIS PERSON REMARKS,ON MY WRITINGS &amp; THEORY...THAT FOR A VERY GOOD WHILE I HAVEN'T BEEN POSTING HERE,FOR A WHILE....BUT I HAVE BEEN WRITING SOME MORE ON "THE STORY"(THOUGH NOT ONLINE....BECAUSE,I HAVE BEEN SO BUSY AT SCHOOL,IN CULINARY CLASS)BUT TO MAKE IT SHORT,AND TO GIVE OUT HINTS ABOUT THE CONTINUEATION OF "THE STORY"....AFTER "NATALIE" IS FOUND OUT,SHE EXPLAINS TO "THE KING" WHO "SHE" REALLY IS,IN TURN "KING LUDWIG",SO EXCITED ABOUT "HER WORLD OF THE 21st CENTURY",DEMANDS THAT SHE TAKES HIM FOR "A LITTLE VISIT TO THE 21st CENTURY".RELUCTANTLY,SHE DOES.IN A SHORT PERIOD OF A SPAN OF ABOUT 2 WEEK HOLIDAY,A SUPPOSED INNOCENT-SPIRITIAL FRIENDSHIP TURNS INTO A VERY INTENSE
PASSIONATE LOVERS TRYST!( AND THIS AIN'T NO "KATE &amp; LEOPOLD",EITHER...BROTHER!)BECAUSE OF THEIR DEEP AFFECTION FOR EACH OTHER,"LUDWIG" VOWS "BECAUSE IN HIS OWN WORLD OF THE 19th CENTURY,HE CAN NEVER,EVER,FIND ANOTHER WOMAN,SUCH AS "NATALIE"...AND DECIDES TO CALL OF 'THE WEDDING WITH HIS COUSIN SOPHIE,..."BUT ONLY AT THE RIGHT MOMENT,WHEN I SEE FIT"'...AND SWEARS OFF "LOVE &amp; MARRIAGE" TO ANYONE,ELSE'....HENCE FORTH,HE ALSO VOWS TO "BUILD SECRET ABODES FOR THEIR SECRET MEETINGS".
TO PUT IT THIS WAY....WHAT I'VE WROTE,SO FAR....IS PRETTY HOT STUFF! ( AND NOT FOR CHILDREN,EITHER!)
SO ANYWAY....I AM SO VERY GLAD THAT YOU STOOD-UP FOR ME...THANX,AGAIN!
SINCERELY,YOUR FRIEND.....RUSALKA /ttiforum/images/graemlins/yum.gif <font color="blue"> [/COLOR](/B)
 
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